Is there some romance in the text? Yes, the Hidden one and the little girl falls in love in the end.
What is positive whit the text? That she mad it to see the hidden one.
What is negative whit the text? That the siblings are fighting.
How does the text ends? That she falls in love whit the Hidden one.
How can you do the text better? It´s a good writer so the text is already good.
A lovely illustration! Write a caption (text) to the illustration.
SvaraRaderaGood questions!
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--they fall in love...
...with...
...she could see...
...how does it end